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To
Keio University Admissions Committee
My
name is Bagus Rezandi
Mohammad. I'm writing this letter to show my desire to apply
for the International Graduate Program
in
Keio University for the fall semester 2013. In
the following letter, I would like to present my reasons for choosing this
program and to provide a general background about myself.
I
have graduated from
Bandung Institute of Technology in Indonesia with a
Bachelor Degree in
Electrical Engineering. I enrolled in the Electrical Engineering Major in ITB because I wanted to make robots which
are capable of interacting
with human
and assists human
in their
daily life. Since my first year as an undergraduate student, I have been planning to
continue my
graduate study
abroad, especially Japan, to
focus on robotic study. I want to help further robotic research in Indonesia
since it's still quite unpopular despite of all the advantages it can bring to
human daily life.
My
final project as an undergraduate student was a research done in a group of
three about
weight-lifting exoskeleton, which is the first exoskeleton to
be developed in Indonesia. Due to the limited time and resources, this first
development was
focused on the testing of
exoskeleton’s
basic hardware and software concept.
Because the exoskeleton wasn’t intended to be worn yet it wasn’t
made ergonomically enough for human, it was very heavy and rigid.
In
my team I was responsible to assemble the hardware and design the position control. For the hardware module, I developed the frame and actuator.
The frame part of the exoskeleton
was designed for
the upper body parts, consisting of back and
two arms with
each having
two hinge joints. The movements of this exoskeleton arms are done by an actuator system consisted of several
pneumatics, several solenoids, an electrical circuit, and a compressor. For
the Position Control
System, I
developed the joint-position
sensor and the position
control algorithm. This system was developed so that the exoskeleton arms are capable to
mimic human’s arms movement.
Inspired
by my previous research, I intended
to design and
develop an assistive technology
to support
rescue team in their work.
My idea is to create a haptic teleoperated robot for emergency help
in disaster area. Teleoperated
means that the robot is unmanned but controlled, or in other words an UGV
(unmanned ground vehicle) robot. Haptic technology allows the robot to transmits
the sense of touch and pressure to the operator and vice versa so the robot arm
will virtually work like operator arm. Haptic technology is very important
because this robot will be designed to give first aid treatment to the victims
if needed, and such task is too complicated to be handled entirely by a robot. I
understand that the realization of this robot will take a lot of time and
effort so I will use my chance as a master student to finish the basic concept,
and development of either haptic system or ugv system.
I want to continue my study in
Keio University because some of the researches conducted there are about haptic
technology, for example is tele-haptic technology research by Professor --- which is very useful for industrial and medical purposes. I
have been in contact with Professor --- and I have received some
materials to improve my research plan. I believe Keio University is very
suitable for me to study about those technologies for my master program. I also
realized that
by enrolling in
the International
Graduate Programe I have a lot of chance to
meet, study and work together with the students that share same interest and I think that is the best way
for me to obtain world class experience. In the future,
I want to continue the research about haptic teleoperated robot as
a lecturer or scientist. And
then I
want to create a smart and affordable robot that can assist human life.
Bukan SoP paling bagus dan paling
benar, masih ada kesalahan grammar di sana sini, terus ada ide yang mungkin tidak
bisa dipahami pembacanya, tapi paling tidak SoP ini berhasil meloloskan saya ke
universitas tujuan saya. Awas jangan copy paste, SoP masing-masing orang pasti beda karena masing-masing punya jalan pendidikannya sendiri.
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